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Sunday, October 25, 2009

AIR EVERYWHERE





Place your hand under mine,
While the water runs upon it,
Touch the subtle breeze,
And the clouds that rest beyond it,

The feather just flows,
Down the spiral of life,
I hold your hand while watching,
What a wonderful sight,

The way is clear,
The sky is so fair,
There is air in the sky,
Air, air, everywhere,

And the sun,
Gives off such an extravagant light,
Completely subduing,
Bringing forth such a peaceful night,

The stars just hang there,
Such a twinkling response,
Supplying the earth a night show,
Giving her all that she wants

The way is clear,
The sky is so fair,
There is air in the sky,
Air, air, everywhere,

And we cuddle,
While looking toward the milky way,
Look extremely quick, my love,
Before it all fades away,

We rest easy,
Just to inhale the breathtaking night,
The breeze just rests upon us,
Setting the mood just right,

The way is clear,
The sky is so fair,
There is air in the sky,
Air, air, everywhere.

6 comments:

  1. This particular poem gives a sense of hope for everything. We need all the hope we can get in this day and age. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Loved this airy piece!

    and thanks for your kind words on mine!

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  3. Nice poem,my friend!
    The movement in form and language is very indicative of the air.Right on with the picture to connect with the poem's idea too.

    Have a great week.
    Much love,
    Melissa

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  4. A most enjoyable poem of hope, hope for the present, hope for the future. Thanks for sharing this.

    Yvonne.

    PS A special thanks for joining "Welcometo my world of poetry........much appreciated.

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  5. this is my favorite so far for october..its light and hopeful..xoxo..Legs

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  6. Hi Lucciano:)

    Your poem on air is breathtaking. You are playing with words like a master craftsman and making them dance to your tune. Amazing creativity. I take my hat off to you.

    Have a wonderful day:)
    Joseph

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