Wish I could show you how much I care,
But I haven’t enough time,
Day light is never enough,
And midnight should be fine,
But by then you’ll be sleeping,
You won’t have enough time,
Dreams will have other plans,
For the corners of your mind,
I’d love and kiss you,
Kiss and love you,
I promise we’ll be fine,
I’d do whatever you ask me to,
If there was enough time,
Wish I could show how much I love you,
But I’m crazy about you all the time,
I can’t show you how I adore you,
If I’m not in my right mind,
You can’t rush a love like this,
Cause true love is hard to find,
One day I’ll put a ring on your finger,
The very second I have time,
I’d love and kiss you,
Kiss and love you,
I promise we’ll be fine,
I’d do whatever you ask me to,
If there was enough time,
Love this poem, Mr. Lucciano! I think what I love most is its pacing...one that is almost light-hearted....for such a heavy subject (love post-poned)it is very creative... This may be one of my favorites (which I must share with you one of these days!) A lucky woman she is to have you and your fierce loving....looking forward to a book soon!
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swichman
Love it!
ReplyDeleteOf course the title caught my eye. The excuse, I love it. It is so real, dont people always blame there insufficence on not having enough time. Great concept and lovely prose.
ReplyDeleteDope! Its straight to the point. Everybody has experience this situation where they wish they had more time to show a person how much they care. Great concept!
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