About Me
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
Without Looking
Its obvious,
That everyone adores you,
Your fragrance, and your extravagant shoes,
Its like the world revolves around what u do,
The slightly drawn on eyebrows are perfectly arched,
So you already look as mean as your walk,
Using one word sentences,
And managing to pull off hand gestures when you talk,
And its apparent that im no different,
Well in that perspective, because I stare too,
Using both eyes, to undress the dress that’s nestled within your breast,
As well as remove the lavender fragrance that your undergarments subdue,
But I feel like I’m being taken advantage of,
I admit that I’m hungry, and can smell what’s in the pot cooking,
And though I’d like to view the substance under the lid,
I think I’ll just pass by, without looking…
For you need my eyes, among others,
In order to feel at peace, as well as complete,
And if this is a rat race for the sake of building your confidence,
I’m in no mood to compete,
So you treat me as the invisible
As though your designer shades disguise me,
And when I finally get you to shift your gears from park to reverse,
You still manage to do it blindly,
And im not saying that you don’t deserve to be treated well
You’re probably sixty percent prettier than most women by far,
But even though this statement is relatively nonfiction,
We all see what kind of woman you are,
And I feel like I’m being taken advantage of,
I admit that I’m hungry, and can smell what’s in the pot cooking,
And though I’d like to view the substance under the lid,
I think I’ll just pass by, without looking…
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I'm digging it, I feel the fire on that one. Looking forward to tomorrow nite.
ReplyDeleteSlam.....lovely word configuration, Mr. Lucciano....dunk. I can smell this one.
ReplyDeleteReally love the play on words...good good good :-)
ReplyDeleteHere's hoping you can see the love; without looking! ;-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful, it was a play on words, different but none the less enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
i crave it... but will it fill me up? powerful and lovely as always, sir!
ReplyDeleteHi Luciano:)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem which put into beautiful words what we all do as normal human beings. We have two eyes to see and we have a fertile imagination.These gifts of God works wonders for us.The truth is, even if something is not good our imagination makes wonderful pictures in our mind.We are all intrigued by the opposite sex whether we are young or old,whether we are male or female.As they say the opposites attract each other.
Great poem with wonderful word portraits.
Best wishes:)
Joseph
Damn!! That made my heart skip a beat!! Loved it!! :) Brown_Suga
ReplyDeleteYour writings have continued to flourish. You're a gift to humanity. I appreciate your gift.
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