tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post7861282920176676601..comments2023-06-27T08:32:30.955-07:00Comments on Half MAN, Half POET: I'M LEAVING YOU (I THINK..)G Luccianohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08916652978294806499noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-11463704886288966712010-11-14T17:03:21.454-08:002010-11-14T17:03:21.454-08:00I love this so much; you are so talented; I pray y...I love this so much; you are so talented; I pray your talents are recognized soon; you have a God given gift I wish I have; bless you baby boy!Ashleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-77434861240495228192010-07-11T16:51:40.336-07:002010-07-11T16:51:40.336-07:00Gosh..Painfully beautiful....my goodness.Gosh..Painfully beautiful....my goodness.TheMochaPeachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09471450481417622605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-36137705788692641432010-04-28T13:47:57.186-07:002010-04-28T13:47:57.186-07:00This is my life in a nutt shell!!!! Good stuff !!...This is my life in a nutt shell!!!! Good stuff !!! Love, TamiTameranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-9225737501097453692009-12-20T18:44:23.626-08:002009-12-20T18:44:23.626-08:00Very nice poem "G" Love it!!Very nice poem "G" Love it!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-87882011852412151132009-12-20T16:19:41.770-08:002009-12-20T16:19:41.770-08:00my tears fell,
the pain i felt...my tears fell,<br />the pain i felt...allconsoffunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03813709782078718857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-13669204938154919112009-12-04T14:18:35.074-08:002009-12-04T14:18:35.074-08:00This is a powerful poem! Thank you for sharing!This is a powerful poem! Thank you for sharing!Cendrinehttp://www.soulpoetrysite.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-57442652809539213362009-11-01T17:45:45.287-08:002009-11-01T17:45:45.287-08:00I loved this oneI loved this oneCarrieVmasonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10936779139228251802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-15185317917847519102009-10-24T04:45:00.183-07:002009-10-24T04:45:00.183-07:00Hi
Its so touching
a little sad :(
I almost cry .....Hi<br />Its so touching<br />a little sad :(<br />I almost cry ........... LOL<br />Its a very lovely poem<br />You are the best :)))))<br />Have a relaxing weekend<br />(@^.^@)Anyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06628814282192212442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-65407342362798222682009-10-22T13:40:50.366-07:002009-10-22T13:40:50.366-07:00So you just gonna leave me like that?
Seriously,...So you just gonna leave me like that? <br /><br />Seriously, your words resonate deep to the core. I'm can feel the angst in between the lines. I love your body of work....juicyfruit4uhttp://www.twitter.com/juicyfruit4unoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-39439633024533179252009-10-22T12:55:30.129-07:002009-10-22T12:55:30.129-07:00I agree this joint is hott my dude,when is the boo...I agree this joint is hott my dude,when is the book coming out,these joints need to be heard with music!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-62180762682101936132009-10-21T14:31:55.659-07:002009-10-21T14:31:55.659-07:00I like the sing-song melodious tune encompassing t...I like the sing-song melodious tune encompassing the tone of pain of this write. Great!Indayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03591131757572208375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-92205620422112527282009-10-21T06:13:11.430-07:002009-10-21T06:13:11.430-07:00Hi Lucciano:)
Amazing poem, carefully crafted wit...Hi Lucciano:)<br /><br />Amazing poem, carefully crafted with vivid pictures painted with words.<br /><br />I look at this poem with two meanings.Perhaps it depicts the true life situation in many peoples lives. But it also contains a lesson to all of us as to what happens when two people can't get along and the need to make sincere efforts by both to understand, appreciate, and be grateful for each others company.<br /><br />In most cases, we take the other for granted and we don't respect each other. The result is that the love which was originally there goes out of the window and venomous enmity prevails. Ego plays a big role in each others attitude and a point is reached when both can't stand the sight of each other.Your words echo in my mind:<br /><br />I can’t lie there,<br />Beside you,<br />This storybook fairytale,<br />Is so untrue.<br /><br />Again there is not guarantee that a person who leaves will find happiness with another person. Everything is a fairy tale in the beginning. But only time will tell what will happen later. People who are married and having children beak up because they can't get along with each other. The children suffer.So when you say the following lines, I think you want to impart a lesson that before breaking up all efforts should made for reconciliation:<br /><br />And there you stand,<br />Arms reaching out to the wind,<br />With words that utter,<br />Can we try this thing again?<br /><br />After all this could be only a wishful thinking and may not happen because the other person will also dance happily to a different tune.<br /><br />I enjoyed this lovely poem or rather a song with a chorus which speaks of reality and a lesson for couples who enter into a relationship what will happen if they can't get along.<br /><br />Have a lovely day Lucciano:)<br />JosephJoseph Pulikotilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07074346261093541776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-63011164732368245312009-10-20T22:03:53.223-07:002009-10-20T22:03:53.223-07:00I agree with the three previous comments;your writ...I agree with the three previous comments;your writing is really wonderful.The repetition allows for a natural rhythm.The poems you write tell a story in the moment,which helps the reader feel as if it is all happening before their eyes.<br /><br />This could be a song,perhaps?<br />Thanks for sharing,G.<br /><br />Much love,<br />MelissaMelissa Barrett-Traisterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03160981180142033454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-68027716811088114562009-10-20T04:32:33.808-07:002009-10-20T04:32:33.808-07:00As always I love your poetry and part of it is bec...As always I love your poetry and part of it is because we , or at least I have been in that position in my near 80 years. I have found myself in that same position and I feel that it could be me in that room, going through a divorce, a marriage that only lasted 5 years and then he died. We were both 37 at that time. This marriage will last till one of us die and it will be 43 years if we make it that long. Your expressions seem to parallel what my life has been. feel all of the emotions you describe. I have been in but not made comments all the time. ou write what real life is about. Thank toy.Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02272388069537746789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-85618477596360602282009-10-20T02:21:42.833-07:002009-10-20T02:21:42.833-07:00Beautiful words of expression. Definitely from th...Beautiful words of expression. Definitely from the heart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5064444976629956536.post-5022004693308936982009-10-19T19:46:07.234-07:002009-10-19T19:46:07.234-07:00Wow, this is beautiful yet sad. Very heartfelt! Yo...Wow, this is beautiful yet sad. Very heartfelt! You have an amazing way with words. No matter who this is for, I hope yall can make it work! :) But at the same time, be happy! You have to be happy!Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07811425490917437870noreply@blogger.com